bonjour quelqu'un aurais un instant pour me dire si le texte en anglais est bon et au prétérit ? merci ^^. During the Christmas holidays, I left for Vendée to m
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bonjour quelqu'un aurais un instant pour me dire si le texte en anglais est bon et au prétérit ? merci ^^.
During the Christmas holidays, I left for Vendée to my grandparents, we visited the Abbey of the swamp which is very interest and magnificent to be seen, we have then food in one restore near the beach(range) and we are to go to dip us feet into the sea by avoiding waves in spite of the water which was very cold. This day was most interest of my holidays, has a share on December 25th which was a very festive day, everybody was very happy of their presents, me I had clothes, money and flavor(perfume). I am then entered my home and on the road we took resolution for the year 2015 and I said myself: make the dishwasher at least twice by weeks, more irritate my particular Prof. of English, learn(teach) even better my lessons and not bicker with my brother.
During the Christmas holidays, I left for Vendée to my grandparents, we visited the Abbey of the swamp which is very interest and magnificent to be seen, we have then food in one restore near the beach(range) and we are to go to dip us feet into the sea by avoiding waves in spite of the water which was very cold. This day was most interest of my holidays, has a share on December 25th which was a very festive day, everybody was very happy of their presents, me I had clothes, money and flavor(perfume). I am then entered my home and on the road we took resolution for the year 2015 and I said myself: make the dishwasher at least twice by weeks, more irritate my particular Prof. of English, learn(teach) even better my lessons and not bicker with my brother.
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